YouTube Feedback on our 2nd Draft

We hoped to spark some reaction from elsewhere with our second draft via comments on the website YouTube, where the video is posted online. We have had one response to the video so far:

"Some of the running scenes got a little drawn out and the camera shaking was a bit over-emphisised. Otherwise great" - Eyezak56

The points raised from this comment relate to others raised from our classmates, making their feedback more reliable and emphasising the need for change in certain aspects of our film opening. We hope to receive further constructive criticism from members of the public on YouTube site.